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His fingers on her cheek,

Soft, a bird returned to its nest

A moment stretched then, before

She turned her head away

There was nothing she could say.

He swore under his breath,

Amazed by her coolness,

And with that he walked away,

Disappeared into an otherwise average day.

He knew nothing of how she felt,

Knowing this was wrong,

Too many years between them had dampened her spirit

And this knowledge through her heart ripped.

The anger, the confusion, she felt as

She tried to make sense of the senseless situation;

She made herself hate him but deep down she knew

That this boy--this man--she still loved true.

She looks up and their eyes unwillingly meet,

Brown to dark, dark to brown

He was used to girls falling at his feet,

But this one was different; in her worhsip of him she was discreet.

He probably never knew

How much he meant to her

There was so much she should say

When at the end he got up, and from her life he walked away.
©2006-2010 ~JDLA
:iconjdla:

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Based on a true story

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:iconwestpenta:
I hope you put up more poetry soon. This is so beautiful, the rhythm flows perfectly.

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Carpe Diem
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:iconjdla:
Thank you sooo much! Will do!
:iconnanagwong:
I nearly forgot to add this to my favs. I still like this poem the best out of all your other ones!

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Beetlejuice, Beetlejuice, Beetlejuice............Damn, didn't work.
:iconjdla:
of course--haha, I think I saw him at the game last night unfortunately. But it could've been someone who looked like him. I also saw Danah (Dianne)!
:iconlovelylucy101:
thats so sad i'm so sorry hun :hug:

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:heart: My Duty Is To My Heart:heart:
:iconjdla:
lol that's ok, thank you! It was so long ago... I still hope....

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"Reach she said for no one else but you
'Cause you won't turn away
When someone else is gone." - "Long Day"

"I am in earnest--I will not equivocate--I will not excuse--I will not retreat a single inch and I will be heard." -- William L. Garrison
:iconsilvercharmed:
Its gorgeous, lovely, heart-wrenching, and strong all at the same time.
You wrote this very well.
The structure is perfect, it carries you right into the piece.

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire
:iconjdla:
thanks! It's based on a real event... :-(

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"Reach she said for no one else but you
'Cause you won't turn away
When someone else is gone." - "Long Day"

"I am in earnest--I will not equivocate--I will not excuse--I will not retreat a single inch and I will be heard." -- William L. Garrison
:iconsilvercharmed:
I'm sorry.
Just remember that what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, and your strength is proved each time you you pick up pen and write such beautiful pieces.

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire

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